Within my pitch I think that it went well overall such as being able to explain my idea with full detail for example, how it would be funded and I would create my idea such as the shots that i would use and the lighting and the moods I will try and contrast. Other things I think went well was showing way things could go wrong and how I could fix this could come under legal and ethical issues but also simple problems that i could run into such camera batteries dying, I was able to answer all the the questions which were given to me as well . Things which didn't go so well where that there was too much info on the screen such as too much writing which can be fixed as well with just keeping it short and sweet with bullet points to make it simple for the person read and other one was the title and that the person I was pitching to did not like it too much and didn't think it fitted which i would agree but could not come up with anything that good, but this does not matter so much as this can be changed later on. The successfulness of pitching and gathering all this information helps me but also allows me to improve on other things which might need changing such as the name of the documentary such as changing it from a simple life to 760 days in Saudi Arabia which was given as feedback. Some other feedback which was helpful was making sure that theres not just lots of information on the slide show and trying to keep it short and sweet instead of lots of information as if its short then it allows the reader to gain info but not get lost or confused by all the writing which is present.  The success of preparation for this was very helpful as i was able to gather more information about Saudi Arabia and some of the laws and things they do differently in their country but it also allowed me to gather more b-roll footage which i could use in my documentary which will make my production look and feel better.